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Overall, what I did during Review Panels and Winter Break is listed as follows:
Some problems:
The advice I received from my review panel was more technical suggestions, such as keeping elbows back to help hide any problems with feather deformations. However, Bob and John made three main points:
I also flipped through some of the old feedback and found someone's mention of Fresh Prince (no specifics) which reminded me of the Las Vegas dance competition scene. I felt that I pretty much needed to overhaul my entire film, but I also was having trouble thinking of it linearly/cohesively and putting down all my ideas, so I decided to sit and type everything down into a short-story type of description. It really helped me figure out exactly what is happening in each section. Basically, the biggest change is the introduction and reveal (especially reveal)-- I took inspiration from Bob's video and decided to take out the bird entirely and have him just show up at the end, which makes more sense in a nonsense-way. I also establish a shoddy club atmosphere to explain away the emptiness, and move one character out to be a DJ, which solves the soundtrack issue!! Yes!!!
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